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"Ever been in the wrong place at the wrong time? Caught up in a mixed up situation? Well you are about to find out what happens when you put dim and dumb together!
From the director of Bridget Jones's diary, Sharon Maguire has done it once again, by coming up with the hilarious new family comedy “Twister!”
Its the Summers must see new family comedy, you are sure to have a bunch of laughs throughout the film. With an ever changing plot it will keep the family entertained for ages.
Starring up-coming actors April Bright, Charlotte Barton and the Grammy award winning actor Korri-Singh-Aulakh. The film has already been nominated for three Oscars this year. The Sun gave the film 5 stars for outstanding performances by the cast.
“Highly Entertaining” - The Sun
"5 Star family comedy” - Says Heat Magazine
“Must see film of the year!!” - The Times
“Side-splittingly funny” - OK Magazine
Annie (April Bright) and Lola (Charlotte Barton) playing the comedic roles of two dim detectives, who controversially find themselves in the wrong place at the wrong time, whilst Aaron (Korri-Singh-Aulakh) also gets caught up in the action. With the misplacement of a valid object things go from bad to worse for Annie and Lola, and whilst trying to return the object, both characters find themselves dealing with out of the ordinary situations. Watch in amazement as both characters come up with “good” ideas only for them to end up in disaster!
Viewers are saying the film is good value for money, and an enjoyable film to watch with the family.